Thursday, September 11, 2008
Welcome Post
First of all i would like to say hi to whoever is reading this blog. May it be my friends, peers,teachers, or just blog readers. My name is Vincent i am currently a junior in Camino Nuevo Highschool. I reside in the downtown area of Los Angeles where the biggiest thing here is not the hollywood area, but how much smog is accumilated and how it affects our communities . A little note to my peers: first of all i would like to congratulate each one of you guys for taking a class that is such a challenge, also that you willingly and knowingly that by joining this class you are doing yourself a greater good. A class in which either you are strivng to become a better writter yourself or trying to perfect your writing; like me for instance, i am taking this class to hopefully accomplish my dream of becoming a great writer for sports magazines such as sports illustrated or espn. So once again i would like to congratulate my peers for deciding to take a class in which you willingly know you are making a greater good of not only yourself but of your future as well. Finally a note to every reader: Hopefully my blog becomes not only some sort of talk among you bloggers but also in a way it becomes some sort of help, and helps you, since my topic is about cool words. So please read my post and hopefully all of you enjoy my blog so please enjoy and hopefull you comment my post to either help me out by knowing what i need to fix, what am i doing good, bad, or if you found my post very interesting. So enough said i hope you enjoy my blog!
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4 comments:
Vincent,
i really like the vocabulary that you used in this introduction. personally i did not think that you were able to write like this. i knew that this class will put you in the right direction to becoming an intelligent scholar. way to go vincent, you have improved since 9th grade. is it because you are taking this ap class.
VINCENT,
I liked how you put your reason for taking this class and made it more personal. There are students in this class that are not in it for the writing, like me, but you seem to know who you really want to be in the future. I mean an ESPN sports collumist sounds like a more than decent job and I think you made a good choice coming to this class. I guess one question i have to ask is, where do you think this class will give you besides a step closer to your job? Is that all your really looking for is there more to it then that? For me, I'm just in it for the grades so i can look better on the resume I write when i turn it in to universities or colleges.
Vincent,
your a great writter with alot of potential.
I enjoyed the use of high vocabulary and hope to learn more about cool words out there.
Vincent, it is a joy to be working with you again.
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